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THIS IS  THE INTRO AND SORRY IF ITS SHORT!~ :( Enjoy!~ :) *there will be different endings! just to be fair*  

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RPOV
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You walked out of Abercrombie and Fitch. Your friend is a girly girl and you are an otaku, Which means you love anime and manga.

"Finally I'm out of that place! It's smells horrible and bleh," you said.

"Now let's go to JC Penny!" your friend exclaims.

"Oh sorry I have to go..um home." You said. "Maybe some other time."

"Oh okay then!"

You waved goodbye to your friend as you walked out of the mall. You then walk towards your (f/c) fiat. It was small but you loved it.
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As you walked to your apt. door. You saw your dear british friend Arthur Watering the plants. He was a tsundere but sweet and has Bushy eyebrows.

"Hello ______," Arthur said as he smiled. He then stared at your shopping bags. "Been out shopping?"

"Yes," You smiled softly. "I had to make an excuse to come home early to avoid Other girly shops."

"I was wondering if you would come over for tea," Arthur asked.

"Yes sure!"

~~~~~~~~~~~ Time skip from the awesome prussia~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"I Want you to meet my allies," Arthur said as he gives you a cup of hot tea. "Ivan, Yao, francis and alfred."

Ivan was tall, and has  gray silverish hair.

"Privjet!" Ivan said smiling softly.
"Hi My name is ______ " You said to the russian man.

Next was Yao. Yao has long black hair and wearing a chinese red jacket.
"Nihao," Yao said.

"Hello!"

After yao was francis. He has shoulder Length blonde hair and Wearing a blue cloak.
"Bonjour sexy," The french man said.

You went red. "Oh hi."

"You idiot bloody frog!"  Arthur said. "That's not how you should address a young lady!"

"What?" Francis said as he flirted with you. You turned into a deep red. And rolled your eyes.

Lastly was Alfred. Alfred has a cowlick and sky blue eyes.

"Hey I'm the hero!" The american said obnoxiously.

"Hey" You said as you smiled.

Arthur rolled his eyes as he sat on his chair.

"There's somet6hing we need to tell you love," Arthur said. His accent thickens. "I, I mean we all fell in love with you."

"WHAT?!"

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to be continued....
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Enjoy ;)
:iconamericasparklesplz: :iconfrancesparklesplz: :iconenglandsparklesplz: :iconwangyaoplz::iconrussiasparklesplz:
I DON'T OWN HETALIA HIMAPAPA DOES!
I do own the story!
Enjoy~!
:iconfryplz: Comment and favorite or else.....
**THERE WILL BE DIFFERENT ENDINGS!~ LIKE ENGLAND'S ENDING OR RUSSIA'S
~ More chapters~
Ch.1 (Francis) =[link]
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:iconxxnegativeboyxx:
xXNeGaTiVeBOYXx Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
Aww, why don't China have sparkles?? :^:
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00ponytail00 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Can't wait till part 2!!! Clem Epic face 
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:iconcialois:
Cialois Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
What about Canada?
:(
Still like it though XD
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:iconhetalialover9001:
hetalialover9001 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014
1. Who's Canada?
2. I actually find it hilarious how they forgot him. But don't worry. One day Canada will snap and make sure everyone knows his name :D
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:iconcialois:
Cialois Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
1. OMFCANADAISAMAZING
2. I look forward to that day XD I always thought it sucked how they always forgot about him or beat him up! And he wasn't in the movie TT^TT
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OR WAS HE?! XD
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:iconhetalialover9001:
hetalialover9001 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
... I actually can't remember... xD
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:iconcialois:
Cialois Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
XD
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:iconanimexghost13:
AnimeXGhost13 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Student General Artist
He was in the movie helping people with Cuba who were turning into aliens. Canada and kumajiro Free Neko Canada Icon Canada emote 
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:iconcialois:
Cialois Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyya
(:
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:iconenglandsgirl2323:
englandsgirl2323 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Artist
I might get back on this series, I was taking a break. I'm not sure yet. I love hetalia but i'm not into it lately.
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:iconcialois:
Cialois Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Oh okay :(
Thanks so much for letting me know!! :)
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:iconenglandsgirl2323:
englandsgirl2323 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Artist
thanks for understanding!
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:iconcialois:
Cialois Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Of course!! :) I know what it's like having people keep asking and asking for you to make something for them, so I usually don't bug people about it :)
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:iconenglandsgirl2323:
englandsgirl2323 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student Artist
Great! I wrote a series called Alchemists in love (edward x reader) and people kept asking for a lemon.
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:iconcialois:
Cialois Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Sorry for the late reply, I just got back.
Wow, that must have been really stressful! I had shown some of my friends my drawings once, and they kept asking me to do things for them. I ended up getting really freaked out over it ._.
But yeah, no pressure and if you feel like you want to continue, I'll be reading!! :3
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:iconenglandsgirl2323:
englandsgirl2323 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student Artist
Thanks!
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katietemonster Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love how China looks like he doesn't care that he doesn't have any sparkles c:
Dat ending <3 I think I almost had a flippin' heart attack!
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:iconparissimmons:
Parissimmons Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014
How come china has no sparkles because he is old HAHA
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:iconcarsyn4242:
carsyn4242 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh this my dream and it's funny too. Quick question: Why isn't China Sparkly did Prussia and Germany not invite him to the sparkle party?
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:iconenglandsgirl2323:
englandsgirl2323 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Artist
We will never know..
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:iconcarsyn4242:
carsyn4242 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Poor China no sparkles Sparkle Party you're invited! *hands you a sparkley invite*
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:iconita-chan-the-awesome:
ita-chan-the-awesome Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Artist
They're all so sparkly......except for China...
*hugs china who's crying*
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:iconask-jemi:
ask-Jemi Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
no sparkles for you, China
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:icontemaitafoeva:
temaitafoeva Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
YEAH NO SPARKALY CHINA'S normal China is enough girlness without adding sparkles... yeah I went there...
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ask-Jemi Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmegustaplz: hurr hurr
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:icontemaitafoeva:
temaitafoeva Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Hurry hurt indeed :iconjamesbondplz:
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:iconask-jemi:
ask-Jemi Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconlikeasirplz: i say!
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:icontemaitafoeva:
temaitafoeva Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
:iconfuckyeahamericaplz: .......:iconwaitwhatplz: what..?
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:icontemaitafoeva:
temaitafoeva Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
:iconchallengeacceptedplz:
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JackFrostLover012398 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
:iconchinasparklesplz:
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:iconkandyrain:
KandyRain Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013   Artist

Canada is part of the allies too...D;

 

Canada: Why have I been forgotten again...? ;n;

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:iconkandyrain:
KandyRain Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013   Artist
I've only seen America's and France's endings so far. XD
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:iconpanda-aru-chan:
Panda-aru-chan Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Boy that escalated quickly OHGAWDNO.  Oh well, gotta love this moment namikaiFANGIRLINGplz  XD
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LyndseyRyder12 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
...:iconescalatedquicklyplz:
W-wow, I'm not THAT great you guys...
Lol, no sparkly China xD
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:iconkandyrain:
KandyRain Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013   Artist

China was left out! D;

 

China: *^* Aiyah...

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:iconenglandsgirl2323:
englandsgirl2323 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Student Artist
haha XD
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lenkagaminexmiku Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
:iconmoarplz: :iconrussiaplz: :iconwangyaoplz: :iconenglandplz: :iconalfredjonesplz:
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:iconkatietemonster:
katietemonster Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The pics XD
I just love how you had Russia as a chibi and everybody else normal...
He's like "Guuurl, ditch these punks!"
Actually... I don't really think he would really say that...

Once you go chibi, you never go back...
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lenkagaminexmiku Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
Pshhh thankies
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:iconkatietemonster:
katietemonster Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problemo~ X3
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:iconlenkagaminexmiku:
lenkagaminexmiku Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
sorry i dont like :iconfrancisplz:
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:iconkandyrain:
KandyRain Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013   Artist
Me neither. Not that much anyway. I like the other's more. XD
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:iconbluegirl1997:
bluegirl1997 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student
yao is not sparkaling, but i like that cus men should not sparkle...ever thats just plain weird. I like my men mortal thank you very much :D
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:iconmurderscreamer:
MurderScreamer Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Professional General Artist
Yao had dark brown hair...not black

Sorry for correcting you ^^'
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AutobotChrome Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
continue! :iconmoarplz:
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:iconautobotchrome:
AutobotChrome Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
lol! I love the picture! XD good intro!
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:iconfunkiestohio66:
FunkiestOhio66 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
*le gasp* They're all in love with me!? Holy! That's... wow...
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:iconthe-puzzle-ninja:
The-Puzzle-Ninja Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I LIEK ALLIED SPARKLE PARTIES
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:iconsoulgirl101:
SoulGirl101 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Artist
Next with beer
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kittyfaikuropuppy Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Haha that's soo cute
Can't wait for the next one :3
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